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Read Keisha’s report comparing butterflies and moths: “Butterflies usually fly during the day, but many moths fly at night. Nocturnal means active at night. Butterflies often have antennae with round ends, while moth antennae can look feathery.” Which sentence gives a definition that helps readers understand an important word?
Butterflies often have antennae with round ends, while moth antennae can look feathery.
Butterflies usually fly during the day, but many moths fly at night.
Nocturnal means active at night.
Butterflies and moths are both insects.
Explanation
This question tests 3rd grade informative/explanatory writing skill of developing the topic with facts, definitions, and details (CCSS.W.3.2.b). Developing a topic means teaching readers about it using facts (true information, often with numbers/specifics), definitions (explaining important words), and details (describing, elaborating, explaining how or why). Well-developed writing doesn't just list bare facts ('Penguins swim'); it elaborates ('Penguins use their flippers like wings to swim up to 15 miles per hour, catching fish underwater'). The combination of facts, definitions, and details helps readers learn and understand the topic fully. For 3rd graders, development means adding specific information and explanation, not just mentioning the topic. In this scenario, Keisha is writing about butterflies and moths and developing it with a definition of an important word like nocturnal. The question tests whether students can identify needed definitions. Choice C is correct because it provides a definition that helps readers understand the important word 'nocturnal' used in context. For example, 'active at night' gives readers a clear understanding of vocabulary. This shows effective topic development. Choice D gives a bare fact without details or elaboration, just stating they are insects. This is common when students list facts from research without explaining or elaborating. This happens because students may think facts alone are enough, or may confuse informative writing with list-making, or may not understand that 'developing' means elaborating and explaining, not just stating. To help students develop topics with facts, definitions, and details: Teach FAD (Facts, And Details): Every fact needs details to develop it. Model expanding bare facts: 'Penguins eat fish' → 'Penguins eat fish like anchovies and sardines, catching them underwater with their sharp beaks.' Practice definitions: When you use important word, explain what it means for readers. Use elaboration prompts: 'Say more about that,' 'Give an example,' 'Explain how,' 'Tell why.' Create development checklist: □ Specific facts (with numbers/names/details)? □ Definitions for hard words? □ Details that describe/explain/elaborate? Compare bare vs developed writing side-by-side. Use mentor texts: highlight facts in one color, definitions in another, details in third. Teach sentence expansion: Start with fact, add 'how,' 'why,' 'when,' 'where' details. Watch for: Bare lists of facts without elaboration. Vague statements ('it's interesting'). Opinions mixed with facts ('best,' 'I think'). Facts without context or explanation. Praise: 'You gave a fact AND added details that help readers understand!'
Read Maya’s informative writing about the water cycle:
“Water can change and move from place to place. Evaporation means water turns into vapor. Water evaporates from oceans, lakes, and puddles. The sun warms the water, and the vapor rises into the air even though you cannot see it.”
Which sentence adds a detail that elaborates on the fact about evaporation?
Evaporation means water turns into vapor.
Water can change and move from place to place.
The sun warms the water, and the vapor rises into the air even though you cannot see it.
Water evaporates from oceans, lakes, and puddles.
Explanation
This question tests 3rd grade informative/explanatory writing skill of developing the topic with facts, definitions, and details (CCSS.W.3.2.b). Developing a topic means teaching readers about it using facts (true information, often with numbers/specifics), definitions (explaining important words), and details (describing, elaborating, explaining how or why). Well-developed writing doesn't just list bare facts ('Penguins swim'); it elaborates ('Penguins use their flippers like wings to swim up to 15 miles per hour, catching fish underwater'). The combination of facts, definitions, and details helps readers learn and understand the topic fully. For 3rd graders, development means adding specific information and explanation, not just mentioning the topic. In this scenario, Maya is writing about the water cycle and developing with a definition and some facts with details; the question tests whether students can identify a sentence that adds an elaborating detail to a fact. Choice B is correct because it adds a detail that elaborates on the fact about evaporation by explaining how it happens and a specific invisible aspect. For example, 'The sun warms the water, and the vapor rises into the air even though you cannot see it' gives readers a detailed picture of the process. This shows effective topic development. Choice A gives a bare fact without details. This is common when students list facts from research without explaining or elaborating. This happens because students may think facts alone are enough, or may confuse informative writing with list-making, or may not understand that 'developing' means elaborating and explaining, not just stating. To help students develop topics with facts, definitions, and details: Teach FAD (Facts, And Details): Every fact needs details to develop it. Model expanding bare facts: 'Penguins eat fish' → 'Penguins eat fish like anchovies and sardines, catching them underwater with their sharp beaks.' Practice definitions: When you use important word, explain what it means for readers. Use elaboration prompts: 'Say more about that,' 'Give an example,' 'Explain how,' 'Tell why.' Create development checklist: □ Specific facts (with numbers/names/details)? □ Definitions for hard words? □ Details that describe/explain/elaborate? Compare bare vs developed writing side-by-side. Use mentor texts: highlight facts in one color, definitions in another, details in third. Teach sentence expansion: Start with fact, add 'how,' 'why,' 'when,' 'where' details. Watch for: Bare lists of facts without elaboration. Vague statements ('it's interesting'). Opinions mixed with facts ('best,' 'I think'). Facts without context or explanation. Praise: 'You gave a fact AND added details that help readers understand!'
Read Jamal’s animal report about sea turtles: “Sea turtles are reptiles. Reptiles are cold-blooded animals, so their bodies warm up in the sun. Sea turtles can live up to about 80 years, and they have hard shells that protect them from predators like sharks.” Which sentence develops the topic with a fact and detail?
Sea turtles swim.
Sea turtles are the coolest ocean animals.
Sea turtles can live up to about 80 years, and they have hard shells that protect them from predators like sharks.
Sea turtles are reptiles.
Explanation
This question tests 3rd grade informative/explanatory writing skill of developing the topic with facts, definitions, and details (CCSS.W.3.2.b). Developing a topic means teaching readers about it using facts (true information, often with numbers/specifics), definitions (explaining important words), and details (describing, elaborating, explaining how or why). Well-developed writing doesn't just list bare facts ('Penguins swim'); it elaborates ('Penguins use their flippers like wings to swim up to 15 miles per hour, catching fish underwater'). The combination of facts, definitions, and details helps readers learn and understand the topic fully. For 3rd graders, development means adding specific information and explanation, not just mentioning the topic. In this scenario, Jamal is writing about sea turtles and developing the topic with facts like lifespan and shells, plus details about protection; the question tests whether students can identify the sentence that develops the topic with a fact and detail. Choice B is correct because it includes specific facts with numbers (up to 80 years) and details (hard shells protect from predators like sharks), elaborating on sea turtle characteristics. For example, mentioning predators like sharks gives readers a detailed picture of how the shell functions in the topic. Choice D gives a bare fact without details, just stating 'Sea turtles swim' without explaining how or why. This is common when students list facts from research without explaining or elaborating. This happens because students may think facts alone are enough, or may confuse informative writing with list-making, or may not understand that 'developing' means elaborating and explaining, not just stating. To help students develop topics with facts, definitions, and details: Teach FAD (Facts, And Details): Every fact needs details to develop it. Model expanding bare facts: 'Penguins eat fish' → 'Penguins eat fish like anchovies and sardines, catching them underwater with their sharp beaks.' Practice definitions: When you use important word, explain what it means for readers. Use elaboration prompts: 'Say more about that,' 'Give an example,' 'Explain how,' 'Tell why.' Create development checklist: □ Specific facts (with numbers/names/details)? □ Definitions for hard words? □ Details that describe/explain/elaborate? Compare bare vs developed writing side-by-side. Use mentor texts: highlight facts in one color, definitions in another, details in third. Teach sentence expansion: Start with fact, add 'how,' 'why,' 'when,' 'where' details. Watch for: Bare lists of facts without elaboration. Vague statements ('it's interesting'). Opinions mixed with facts ('best,' 'I think'). Facts without context or explanation. Praise: 'You gave a fact AND added details that help readers understand!'
Read Maya’s report about Rosa Parks: “Rosa Parks refused to give up her bus seat in 1955. Segregation meant Black and white people had to use separate areas. Rosa Parks was arrested, and her arrest helped start the Montgomery Bus Boycott that lasted 381 days.” What does Maya define to help readers understand the topic?
an arrest
segregation
a boycott
a bus seat
Explanation
This question tests 3rd grade informative/explanatory writing skill of developing the topic with facts, definitions, and details (CCSS.W.3.2.b). Developing a topic means teaching readers about it using facts (true information, often with numbers/specifics), definitions (explaining important words), and details (describing, elaborating, explaining how or why). Well-developed writing doesn't just list bare facts ('Penguins swim'); it elaborates ('Penguins use their flippers like wings to swim up to 15 miles per hour, catching fish underwater'). The combination of facts, definitions, and details helps readers learn and understand the topic fully. For 3rd graders, development means adding specific information and explanation, not just mentioning the topic. In this scenario, Maya is writing about Rosa Parks and developing it with a definition of segregation. The question tests whether students can identify needed definitions. Choice C is correct because it identifies the term 'segregation' that is defined to help readers understand the historical context. For example, defining it as 'Black and white people had to use separate areas' gives readers a clear understanding of vocabulary. This shows effective topic development. Choice A is off-topic as 'boycott' is mentioned but not defined in the report. This is common when students use technical words without defining them. This happens because students may assume readers know terms, or may not understand that 'developing' means elaborating and explaining, not just stating. To help students develop topics with facts, definitions, and details: Teach FAD (Facts, And Details): Every fact needs details to develop it. Model expanding bare facts: 'Penguins eat fish' → 'Penguins eat fish like anchovies and sardines, catching them underwater with their sharp beaks.' Practice definitions: When you use important word, explain what it means for readers. Use elaboration prompts: 'Say more about that,' 'Give an example,' 'Explain how,' 'Tell why.' Create development checklist: □ Specific facts (with numbers/names/details)? □ Definitions for hard words? □ Details that describe/explain/elaborate? Compare bare vs developed writing side-by-side. Use mentor texts: highlight facts in one color, definitions in another, details in third. Teach sentence expansion: Start with fact, add 'how,' 'why,' 'when,' 'where' details. Watch for: Bare lists of facts without elaboration. Vague statements ('it's interesting'). Opinions mixed with facts ('best,' 'I think'). Facts without context or explanation. Praise: 'You gave a fact AND added details that help readers understand!'
Read Chen’s animal report about sea turtles: “Sea turtles lay their eggs on sandy beaches. When the baby turtles hatch, they crawl toward the ocean, using the moonlight to help guide them. Many predators, like birds and crabs, try to catch the babies on the way.” Which sentence gives only a fact without developing it with details?
Sea turtles lay their eggs on sandy beaches.
Many predators, like birds and crabs, try to catch the babies on the way.
When the baby turtles hatch, they crawl toward the ocean, using the moonlight to help guide them.
Baby turtles are small and move quickly across the sand to reach safety.
Explanation
This question tests 3rd grade informative/explanatory writing skill of developing the topic with facts, definitions, and details (CCSS.W.3.2.b). Developing a topic means teaching readers about it using facts (true information, often with numbers/specifics), definitions (explaining important words), and details (describing, elaborating, explaining how or why). Well-developed writing doesn't just list bare facts ('Penguins swim'); it elaborates ('Penguins use their flippers like wings to swim up to 15 miles per hour, catching fish underwater'). The combination of facts, definitions, and details helps readers learn and understand the topic fully. For 3rd graders, development means adding specific information and explanation, not just mentioning the topic. In this scenario, Chen is writing about sea turtles and giving some bare facts without details. The question tests whether students can identify writing that needs more development. Choice C is correct because it gives only a bare fact without developing it with details, just stating where eggs are laid. For example, 'lay their eggs on sandy beaches' lacks elaboration on how or why. This shows ineffective topic development. Choice A elaborates with details that explain how babies hatch and move. This is common when students list facts from research without explaining or elaborating. This happens because students may think facts alone are enough, or may confuse informative writing with list-making, or may not understand that 'developing' means elaborating and explaining, not just stating. To help students develop topics with facts, definitions, and details: Teach FAD (Facts, And Details): Every fact needs details to develop it. Model expanding bare facts: 'Penguins eat fish' → 'Penguins eat fish like anchovies and sardines, catching them underwater with their sharp beaks.' Practice definitions: When you use important word, explain what it means for readers. Use elaboration prompts: 'Say more about that,' 'Give an example,' 'Explain how,' 'Tell why.' Create development checklist: □ Specific facts (with numbers/names/details)? □ Definitions for hard words? □ Details that describe/explain/elaborate? Compare bare vs developed writing side-by-side. Use mentor texts: highlight facts in one color, definitions in another, details in third. Teach sentence expansion: Start with fact, add 'how,' 'why,' 'when,' 'where' details. Watch for: Bare lists of facts without elaboration. Vague statements ('it's interesting'). Opinions mixed with facts ('best,' 'I think'). Facts without context or explanation. Praise: 'You gave a fact AND added details that help readers understand!'
Read Emma’s informative writing about how libraries work: “Libraries lend books for free. A librarian is a person who helps you find books and use the computer catalog. Many libraries let you keep books for two weeks, and you return them to the front desk or book drop.” Which sentence provides a definition that helps readers understand the topic?
A librarian is a person who helps you find books and use the computer catalog.
Libraries lend books for free.
Many libraries let you keep books for two weeks.
You return them to the front desk or book drop.
Explanation
This question tests 3rd grade informative/explanatory writing skill of developing the topic with facts, definitions, and details (CCSS.W.3.2.b). Developing a topic means teaching readers about it using facts (true information, often with numbers/specifics), definitions (explaining important words), and details (describing, elaborating, explaining how or why). Well-developed writing doesn't just list bare facts ('Penguins swim'); it elaborates ('Penguins use their flippers like wings to swim up to 15 miles per hour, catching fish underwater'). The combination of facts, definitions, and details helps readers learn and understand the topic fully. For 3rd graders, development means adding specific information and explanation, not just mentioning the topic. In this scenario, Emma is writing about how libraries work, developing with facts about lending and a definition of librarian; the question tests whether students can identify the sentence that provides a definition to help readers understand the topic. Choice D is correct because it provides a definition of 'librarian,' explaining their role in helping find books and use catalogs. For example, this definition gives readers a clear understanding of key vocabulary in the library process. Choice A gives a bare fact without details or definition, just stating libraries lend for free without elaborating. This is common when students list facts from research without explaining or elaborating. This happens because students may think facts alone are enough, or may confuse informative writing with list-making, or may not understand that 'developing' means elaborating and explaining, not just stating. To help students develop topics with facts, definitions, and details: Teach FAD (Facts, And Details): Every fact needs details to develop it. Model expanding bare facts: 'Penguins eat fish' → 'Penguins eat fish like anchovies and sardines, catching them underwater with their sharp beaks.' Practice definitions: When you use important word, explain what it means for readers. Use elaboration prompts: 'Say more about that,' 'Give an example,' 'Explain how,' 'Tell why.' Create development checklist: □ Specific facts (with numbers/names/details)? □ Definitions for hard words? □ Details that describe/explain/elaborate? Compare bare vs developed writing side-by-side. Use mentor texts: highlight facts in one color, definitions in another, details in third. Teach sentence expansion: Start with fact, add 'how,' 'why,' 'when,' 'where' details. Watch for: Bare lists of facts without elaboration. Vague statements ('it's interesting'). Opinions mixed with facts ('best,' 'I think'). Facts without context or explanation. Praise: 'You gave a fact AND added details that help readers understand!'
Read Emma’s informative writing comparing butterflies and moths: “Butterflies and moths both start as caterpillars. Many moths are nocturnal, so they fly at night to find food. Butterflies usually rest at night and fly in the daytime when flowers are open.” How does Emma develop the topic of butterflies and moths?
She lists opinions about which insect is better.
She tells a personal story about catching insects.
She uses facts and details to explain when they are active.
She asks questions but does not give information.
Explanation
This question tests 3rd grade informative/explanatory writing skill of developing the topic with facts, definitions, and details (CCSS.W.3.2.b). Developing a topic means teaching readers about it using facts (true information, often with numbers/specifics), definitions (explaining important words), and details (describing, elaborating, explaining how or why). Well-developed writing doesn't just list bare facts ('Penguins swim'); it elaborates ('Penguins use their flippers like wings to swim up to 15 miles per hour, catching fish underwater'). The combination of facts, definitions, and details helps readers learn and understand the topic fully. For 3rd graders, development means adding specific information and explanation, not just mentioning the topic. In this scenario, Emma is writing about butterflies and moths and developing it with facts and details about their activity times. The question tests whether students can identify specific facts and details. Choice B is correct because it describes how she uses facts and details to explain activity times. For example, explaining nocturnal moths fly at night for food gives readers factual information and elaboration. This shows effective topic development. Choice A lists opinions, which is not what Emma does. This is common when students confuse facts with opinions. This happens because students may think personal views develop topics, or may not understand that 'developing' means elaborating and explaining, not just stating. To help students develop topics with facts, definitions, and details: Teach FAD (Facts, And Details): Every fact needs details to develop it. Model expanding bare facts: 'Penguins eat fish' → 'Penguins eat fish like anchovies and sardines, catching them underwater with their sharp beaks.' Practice definitions: When you use important word, explain what it means for readers. Use elaboration prompts: 'Say more about that,' 'Give an example,' 'Explain how,' 'Tell why.' Create development checklist: □ Specific facts (with numbers/names/details)? □ Definitions for hard words? □ Details that describe/explain/elaborate? Compare bare vs developed writing side-by-side. Use mentor texts: highlight facts in one color, definitions in another, details in third. Teach sentence expansion: Start with fact, add 'how,' 'why,' 'when,' 'where' details. Watch for: Bare lists of facts without elaboration. Vague statements ('it's interesting'). Opinions mixed with facts ('best,' 'I think'). Facts without context or explanation. Praise: 'You gave a fact AND added details that help readers understand!'
Read Yuki’s informative writing about rainforests:
“Rainforests are warm, wet forests near the equator. They have different layers, including the canopy. The canopy is the layer of treetops that gets the most sunlight. Because the canopy is high and bright, many birds build nests there.”
Which revision would better develop the topic by adding a specific fact and detail?
Rainforests are warm forests.
Rainforests are nice places with many trees.
Rainforests receive over 100 inches of rain each year, so plants grow thick and green.
I would like to visit a rainforest someday.
Explanation
This question tests 3rd grade informative/explanatory writing skill of developing the topic with facts, definitions, and details (CCSS.W.3.2.b). Developing a topic means teaching readers about it using facts (true information, often with numbers/specifics), definitions (explaining important words), and details (describing, elaborating, explaining how or why). Well-developed writing doesn't just list bare facts ('Penguins swim'); it elaborates ('Penguins use their flippers like wings to swim up to 15 miles per hour, catching fish underwater'). The combination of facts, definitions, and details helps readers learn and understand the topic fully. For 3rd graders, development means adding specific information and explanation, not just mentioning the topic. In this scenario, Yuki is writing about rainforests with some definitions and details, but the question tests identifying a revision that adds a specific fact and detail for better development. Choice C is correct because it includes a specific fact with numbers and elaborates with a detail explaining the result. For example, 'Rainforests receive over 100 inches of rain each year, so plants grow thick and green' gives readers factual information and a detailed explanation of why. This shows effective topic development. Choice A is too vague to teach anything, using words like 'nice' without specifics. This is common when students use vague statements instead of specific facts. This happens because students may think facts alone are enough, or may confuse informative writing with list-making, or may not understand that 'developing' means elaborating and explaining, not just stating. To help students develop topics with facts, definitions, and details: Teach FAD (Facts, And Details): Every fact needs details to develop it. Model expanding bare facts: 'Penguins eat fish' → 'Penguins eat fish like anchovies and sardines, catching them underwater with their sharp beaks.' Practice definitions: When you use important word, explain what it means for readers. Use elaboration prompts: 'Say more about that,' 'Give an example,' 'Explain how,' 'Tell why.' Create development checklist: □ Specific facts (with numbers/names/details)? □ Definitions for hard words? □ Details that describe/explain/elaborate? Compare bare vs developed writing side-by-side. Use mentor texts: highlight facts in one color, definitions in another, details in third. Teach sentence expansion: Start with fact, add 'how,' 'why,' 'when,' 'where' details. Watch for: Bare lists of facts without elaboration. Vague statements ('it's interesting'). Opinions mixed with facts ('best,' 'I think'). Facts without context or explanation. Praise: 'You gave a fact AND added details that help readers understand!'
Read Amir’s writing about the water cycle: “Clouds form when water vapor cools and turns back into tiny drops. Condensation means water vapor changes into liquid water. These drops stick together and make clouds that can bring rain or snow.” Which sentence provides a definition that helps develop the topic?
Clouds form when water vapor cools and turns back into tiny drops.
Condensation means water vapor changes into liquid water.
Clouds are in the sky.
Rain is wet.
Explanation
This question tests 3rd grade informative/explanatory writing skill of developing the topic with facts, definitions, and details (CCSS.W.3.2.b). Developing a topic means teaching readers about it using facts (true information, often with numbers/specifics), definitions (explaining important words), and details (describing, elaborating, explaining how or why). Well-developed writing doesn't just list bare facts ('Penguins swim'); it elaborates ('Penguins use their flippers like wings to swim up to 15 miles per hour, catching fish underwater'). The combination of facts, definitions, and details helps readers learn and understand the topic fully. For 3rd graders, development means adding specific information and explanation, not just mentioning the topic. In this scenario, Amir is writing about the water cycle and developing it with a definition of condensation. The question tests whether students can identify needed definitions. Choice B is correct because it provides a definition that helps readers understand 'condensation' in the context of cloud formation. For example, 'water vapor changes into liquid water' gives readers a clear understanding of vocabulary. This shows effective topic development. Choice C is too vague to teach anything, just stating clouds are in the sky without details. This is common when students use vague statements instead of specific facts. This happens because students may think general ideas are enough, or may not understand that 'developing' means elaborating and explaining, not just stating. To help students develop topics with facts, definitions, and details: Teach FAD (Facts, And Details): Every fact needs details to develop it. Model expanding bare facts: 'Penguins eat fish' → 'Penguins eat fish like anchovies and sardines, catching them underwater with their sharp beaks.' Practice definitions: When you use important word, explain what it means for readers. Use elaboration prompts: 'Say more about that,' 'Give an example,' 'Explain how,' 'Tell why.' Create development checklist: □ Specific facts (with numbers/names/details)? □ Definitions for hard words? □ Details that describe/explain/elaborate? Compare bare vs developed writing side-by-side. Use mentor texts: highlight facts in one color, definitions in another, details in third. Teach sentence expansion: Start with fact, add 'how,' 'why,' 'when,' 'where' details. Watch for: Bare lists of facts without elaboration. Vague statements ('it's interesting'). Opinions mixed with facts ('best,' 'I think'). Facts without context or explanation. Praise: 'You gave a fact AND added details that help readers understand!'
Read Marcus’s report about Rosa Parks: “Rosa Parks refused to give up her seat on a bus in 1955. Segregation meant Black and white people had to use separate areas. She was arrested, and this helped lead to the Montgomery Bus Boycott, which lasted 381 days.” How does Marcus develop the topic of Rosa Parks?
He uses a date, defines segregation, and adds details about what happened after.
He lists opinions about why buses are important.
He tells a personal story about meeting Rosa Parks.
He asks questions to make the reader wonder.
Explanation
This question tests 3rd grade informative/explanatory writing skill of developing the topic with facts, definitions, and details (CCSS.W.3.2.b). Developing a topic means teaching readers about it using facts (true information, often with numbers/specifics), definitions (explaining important words), and details (describing, elaborating, explaining how or why). Well-developed writing doesn't just list bare facts ('Penguins swim'); it elaborates ('Penguins use their flippers like wings to swim up to 15 miles per hour, catching fish underwater'). The combination of facts, definitions, and details helps readers learn and understand the topic fully. For 3rd graders, development means adding specific information and explanation, not just mentioning the topic. In this scenario, Marcus is writing about Rosa Parks, developing with a date, definition of segregation, and details about consequences; the question tests whether students can identify how he develops the topic. Choice B is correct because it describes using a date, defining segregation, and adding details about the aftermath, combining facts and details to develop the topic. For example, mentioning the boycott's 381 days gives readers factual information and a detailed picture of the event's impact. Choice D lists opinions instead of facts, which doesn't develop with objective information. This is common when students include opinions instead of facts. This happens because students may think facts alone are enough, or may confuse informative writing with list-making, or may not understand that 'developing' means elaborating and explaining, not just stating. To help students develop topics with facts, definitions, and details: Teach FAD (Facts, And Details): Every fact needs details to develop it. Model expanding bare facts: 'Penguins eat fish' → 'Penguins eat fish like anchovies and sardines, catching them underwater with their sharp beaks.' Practice definitions: When you use important word, explain what it means for readers. Use elaboration prompts: 'Say more about that,' 'Give an example,' 'Explain how,' 'Tell why.' Create development checklist: □ Specific facts (with numbers/names/details)? □ Definitions for hard words? □ Details that describe/explain/elaborate? Compare bare vs developed writing side-by-side. Use mentor texts: highlight facts in one color, definitions in another, details in third. Teach sentence expansion: Start with fact, add 'how,' 'why,' 'when,' 'where' details. Watch for: Bare lists of facts without elaboration. Vague statements ('it's interesting'). Opinions mixed with facts ('best,' 'I think'). Facts without context or explanation. Praise: 'You gave a fact AND added details that help readers understand!'