AP English Language and Composition Quiz: Develop Reasoning Effectively Throughout Argument

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Student essay (Paragraphs 1–4)

[1] Our city should adopt a year-round "car-free downtown" policy that closes several central streets to private vehicles. The plan would still allow buses, delivery vehicles during limited hours, and emergency services. A car-free downtown would make the city healthier, safer, and more economically stable by shifting daily life toward walking and public transit.

[2] First, health improves when people move more. When streets are designed for cars, walking becomes something you do only in a park. But when streets are designed for people, walking becomes the default. If downtown is car-free, residents will walk between errands instead of circling for parking. That daily movement matters because it lowers stress and helps prevent chronic illness.

[3] Safety is another reason. Cars create danger simply because they are heavy and fast. If there are fewer cars downtown, there are fewer collisions, and that means fewer injuries. Some people argue that drivers will just speed on nearby streets, but the city can add speed bumps and crosswalks. Fewer cars means fewer crashes, so the policy is safer.

[4] Finally, a car-free downtown would help the local economy. When streets are pleasant, people linger, and when people linger, they shop. Tourists also prefer districts where they can take photos without traffic. In addition, fewer cars means less pollution, and less pollution means the city looks cleaner, which attracts more shoppers. For all these reasons, the city should close downtown streets to private vehicles.

Diagnosis: Which aspect most weakens the author's line of reasoning?

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Student essay (Paragraphs 1–4)

[1] Our state should make community college tuition-free for recent high school graduates. The policy could be funded by redirecting a small portion of existing workforce development funds. Tuition-free community college would expand opportunity and strengthen the economy by increasing the number of trained workers.

[2] First, cost is a real barrier. Even if tuition is "cheaper" than a university, it can still be too much for families living paycheck to paycheck. If tuition is free, students can enroll without taking on debt, and they can focus on coursework.

[3] Second, the economy benefits. Employers complain they can't find qualified applicants for technical jobs. Community colleges teach those skills quickly. If more people attend, more people will be trained, and businesses will have a stronger workforce.

[4] Finally, free tuition is fair because education is important. Education helps society because educated people are better citizens. Since education matters, the state should pay for it.

Diagnosis: Which aspect most weakens the author's line of reasoning?

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Colleges should make community service a graduation requirement. At my school, students who volunteer often say they feel more connected, and our guidance office claims scholarships frequently ask for service hours. Requiring service would benefit students and society.

Service helps communities. Food banks, animal shelters, and tutoring programs rely on volunteers. If colleges require service, more people will help in these places.

Service also helps students. Volunteering teaches time management and communication. Students meet people outside their usual circles, which can make them more open-minded.

Some critics argue that forcing service ruins the point, because "real" volunteering should be voluntary. But students are forced to take many classes they do not choose, and those classes still teach them. Service would be similar.

Therefore, colleges should require community service because it helps communities and helps students grow.

Revision: Which revision would most improve the essay's logical development?

A. Replace "ruins the point" with a more academic phrase to improve diction. B. In paragraph 4, address the difference between required classes and required service by explaining how colleges could preserve student choice (e.g., selecting among many organizations) and prevent "check-the-box" volunteering. C. Add a sentence in paragraph 2 listing additional types of nonprofits. D. Repeat the scholarship point in the conclusion to reinforce the introduction.

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Many teachers assign summer reading, but my district should replace mandatory summer reading with optional "reading choice lists." The policy debate matters because our superintendent claims required books build rigor, while students argue the assignments create stress and reduce enjoyment. Optional lists would still encourage reading while respecting different schedules.

Students have different summers. Some travel, some work long hours, and some take care of siblings. A single required novel assumes everyone has the same free time and quiet space, which is not true. Optional lists would allow students to choose shorter or longer books based on their situation.

Also, choice increases motivation. When students pick a book that interests them, they are more likely to finish it and remember it. This is still academic, because reading any book builds vocabulary and comprehension.

However, rigor is important. Schools should not lower expectations just because students complain. In fact, reading a challenging classic can teach discipline.

For these reasons, the district should adopt optional reading lists instead of mandatory assignments.

Revision: Which revision would most improve the essay's logical development?

A. In paragraph 4, explicitly explain how optional lists can still include rigorous options and how teachers could assess reading without requiring the same book for everyone. B. Replace the phrase "students complain" with "students express concerns" to sound more respectful. C. Add a sentence to paragraph 2 that describes a personal anecdote about working a summer job. D. Add another concluding sentence restating that "choice increases motivation."

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Our town should limit short-term rentals in residential neighborhoods. In the last year, two streets near mine went from mostly long-term neighbors to several houses that rotate new guests each weekend. Supporters say rentals bring tourism dollars, but the town must prioritize stable housing and community life.

Short-term rentals reduce the supply of long-term housing. When owners realize they can make more money renting nightly, they stop renting to local families. That pushes rent higher for everyone else.

They also change the feeling of a neighborhood. People are less likely to know each other if the house next door is different every week. Community safety depends on familiarity.

Tourism is good for the economy, though. Visitors eat at restaurants and shop downtown. That is why some people want more rentals.

Overall, the town should limit short-term rentals because housing stability matters more than tourist spending.

Diagnosis: Which aspect most weakens the author's line of reasoning?

A. Paragraph 4 introduces tourism benefits but does not explain why those benefits are outweighed by the housing and community harms, leaving the argument underdeveloped. B. The essay uses the word "also" multiple times, which makes the writing repetitive. C. The author should add more descriptive imagery about the streets near their home. D. The essay should use a more formal title to sound credible.

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Student essay (approx. 380 words):

Many schools are debating whether to replace most printed textbooks with school-issued tablets. While tablets sound modern, schools should keep printed textbooks as the primary resource because they support focus, equal access, and long-term learning.

First, printed books help students focus. A tablet is designed to do many things at once: messages, games, and endless tabs. Even with "school mode," students know the device can do more than the lesson, which makes it harder to concentrate. In contrast, a textbook does one job. When students open it, they see the chapter, not a dozen icons calling for attention. If schools want deeper reading and better comprehension, they should choose the format that naturally reduces distraction.

Second, keeping print protects equal access. Not every student has reliable internet at home, and not every family can afford to replace a broken device quickly. Schools can say they will provide hotspots or insurance, but those programs often have limits and complicated rules. A printed textbook works anywhere, without Wi-Fi or charging. If education is supposed to be a public good, the main learning tool should not depend on a battery.

Third, tablets are expensive. Districts have to buy devices, update them, repair them, and eventually replace them. Companies also charge for licenses and digital platforms. Schools already spend money on sports, dances, and decorations, so they can afford textbooks too. If budgets are tight, it makes more sense to invest in durable books that can be reused for years.

Finally, reading on paper builds long-term learning habits. Students can annotate margins, flip back easily, and remember where information appears on a page. Many adults still prefer paper for serious reading because it feels more "real." That preference matters because it shows our brains are wired for paper. Schools should not rush to replace a proven tool just because tablets look innovative.

Which aspect most weakens the author's line of reasoning across the argument?

(Consider how the paragraphs connect and whether claims are supported and logically advanced.)

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Student essay (approx. 420 words):

Because social media spreads information quickly, some people want governments to ban anonymous accounts. That approach is misguided. Governments should protect online anonymity because it enables whistleblowing, supports vulnerable speakers, and encourages honest debate.

Anonymity allows whistleblowers to report corruption without immediate retaliation. If every account had to be tied to a legal identity, fewer people would expose unethical behavior in workplaces or public agencies. When the cost of speaking is too high, wrongdoing grows.

Anonymity also protects vulnerable groups. Teenagers questioning their identity, victims seeking help, and political dissidents often need privacy to speak safely. For them, anonymity is not a trick; it is protection.

However, anonymity can enable harassment. People can hide behind fake names to threaten others. Therefore, the best solution is to ban anonymity entirely. Once everyone is identifiable, harassment will stop, and online spaces will become kinder.

Finally, anonymity can improve debate. When people are not judged by their profile picture or social status, ideas can stand on their own. In some cases, anonymity reduces bias because readers focus on the argument rather than the person.

Which revision would most improve the essay's logical development?

(Choose the option that best fixes the argument's progression.)

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The student council is considering a rule that would require all clubs to hold at least one community service event per semester. I support this rule because it builds character, improves the school's reputation, and teaches leadership.

Community service builds character. When students volunteer, they learn empathy and gratitude. It also helps students realize they are part of something bigger than themselves. These lessons matter as much as academics.

Service also improves the school's reputation. If the community sees students cleaning parks or tutoring younger kids, people will think better of our school. A better reputation can lead to more donations and partnerships.

Finally, service teaches leadership. Planning an event requires communication, scheduling, and teamwork. Students who lead service projects learn how to manage people and solve problems. Those are skills that help in college and careers.

Some critics say clubs are already busy, but clubs can simply choose small projects. Even writing cards for hospital patients counts. Since service is good, every club should do it.

Therefore, the rule should pass because it will make students better and make the school stronger.

Revision: Which revision would most improve the essay's logical development?

A. Add a sentence to paragraph 5 explaining why requiring service (rather than encouraging it) is necessary, and address how the rule would avoid becoming "check-the-box" participation. B. Replace "counts" with "qualifies" to make the tone more formal. C. Add another example of a service activity (like a food drive) to paragraph 1. D. Add a concluding sentence repeating that service "builds character" to reinforce the main idea.

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Student essay (Paragraphs 1–4)

[1] Cities should ban single-use plastic water bottles at public events (like festivals and races) and require refill stations instead. Because public events are high-volume sources of waste, a bottle ban would reduce pollution and push communities toward reusable habits.

[2] The main benefit is less trash. After festivals, parks are often covered in bottles that blow into storm drains. Even when volunteers clean up, some plastic breaks into smaller pieces and ends up in rivers. A refill station system would cut that waste immediately.

[3] Some critics say bans are unfair because people forget reusable bottles. But forgetting is not an argument against a policy; it is an argument for better planning. Events can sell reusable bottles at cost and provide cups at refill stations. If people can remember tickets and phones, they can remember bottles.

[4] Also, banning bottles would show that the city is a leader. Leadership matters because it inspires other cities to do the same. When other cities copy the policy, there will be less plastic overall. Therefore, the city should adopt the ban this year.

Revision: Which revision would most improve logical development across the essay?

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Student essay (Paragraphs 1–4)

[1] The school board should require a one-semester personal finance course for graduation. Students learn algebra and literature, but many graduate not knowing how interest works or how to budget. A required finance course would prepare students for adult life by preventing avoidable debt and helping them make informed choices.

[2] Credit cards and loans are everywhere. A teenager can be offered a credit card in the mail before they even understand how fees add up. If students learn compound interest and minimum payments, they will be less likely to fall into traps. This is practical knowledge that protects them.

[3] Also, a finance class could be fun. Students could do projects about imaginary businesses or pretend to invest. When school is fun, students are more engaged. Engagement helps attendance, and attendance helps learning.

[4] Finally, requiring finance would show the district cares about the "real world." It would make the school look modern, and parents would be impressed. For these reasons, the board should adopt the requirement next year.

Diagnosis: Which aspect most weakens the author's line of reasoning?

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In my town, the school board is considering moving the start time for high school from 7:20 a.m. to 8:30 a.m. The board's memo says the change would require shifting bus routes and might reduce time for after-school sports. Still, the district should adopt the later start time because it would help students learn and would make school safer.

First, teenagers are not designed to fall asleep at 10 p.m. the way adults want them to. Between homework, jobs, and family responsibilities, many students can't get enough sleep, and then they are expected to take tests at 7:30 in the morning. If we want better grades, it makes sense to schedule school when students can actually focus. A later start time is basically like giving students a tool they can use every day.

Second, safety matters. Sleepy driving is real, and many students drive themselves or ride with other teenagers. If school starts later, they won't be on the road in the darkest, groggiest part of the morning. The board talks about sports, but sports do not matter if students are getting into accidents.

Third, some people argue that changing the schedule would be "inconvenient" for parents. But inconvenience is part of life, and adults adjust to new policies all the time. When our town changed trash pickup days, everyone complained for a month and then it became normal. A school schedule change would be the same.

Finally, later start times would improve learning because students would be less tired. When students are less tired, they pay attention more, which leads to better grades. Better grades help students get into college, which helps the town's reputation. Therefore, the board should vote yes.

Diagnosis: Which aspect most weakens the author's line of reasoning?

A. The essay uses short sentences in paragraph 2, which makes the tone feel rushed. B. The essay assumes that because adults adjusted to a trash-pickup change, families will adjust similarly to a start-time change, without addressing key differences between the situations. C. The essay should define "reputation" more precisely in the final paragraph. D. The essay repeats the phrase "less tired," which is stylistically repetitive.

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Student essay (approx. 390 words):

To reduce traffic and pollution, companies should keep remote work options even after emergencies end. Remote work lowers commuting emissions, expands access to jobs, and can improve productivity when implemented thoughtfully.

Commuting is a major source of urban emissions. If even two days a week are remote, that is two fewer round trips per employee. Fewer cars also mean less congestion for people who must drive, like delivery workers or caregivers.

Remote work also expands opportunity. People with disabilities, chronic illness, or caregiving responsibilities can participate more consistently when they are not required to commute daily. It can also allow workers in rural areas to apply for jobs previously limited to big cities.

Paragraph 3 begins here: Some managers argue that remote work harms collaboration. But collaboration is not the same as constant physical proximity. Teams can schedule focused meetings, use shared documents, and set clear response expectations. In-person time can be reserved for tasks that truly require it, like training or complex brainstorming.

Remote work can also improve productivity. Many employees report fewer interruptions at home than in open offices. When workers have more control over their environment, they can do deeper work. Of course, remote work is not perfect, and companies should offer hybrid options and support employees with equipment.

Which addition would best clarify how paragraph 3 advances the thesis?

(Insert one sentence at the end of paragraph 3.)

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Student essay (approx. 400 words):

To address climate change, cities should expand public transit before investing in flashy "smart city" gadgets. Transit reduces emissions at scale, supports workers, and makes urban life more affordable.

Expanding buses and trains cuts emissions because it reduces the number of cars on the road. Even if some buses use fuel, one full bus replaces dozens of separate commutes. Transit also encourages denser development, which shortens trips and lowers energy use.

Transit is also an economic policy. Reliable routes help workers reach jobs on time, and they help employers hire from a wider area. When people can commute without owning a car, they save money on gas, repairs, and insurance.

Paragraph 3 begins here: Some city leaders prefer smart gadgets like app-controlled streetlights or sensor-equipped trash cans. Those tools might be convenient, but they do not solve the main problem. A trash sensor does not help a nurse get to a night shift, and a streetlight app does not replace a train line. If cities spend limited funds on gadgets first, they risk ignoring the infrastructure that changes daily behavior.

Finally, transit investments promote fairness. Low-income residents are more likely to rely on buses, and better service reduces the "time tax" of long commutes. If climate policy is only for people who can afford electric cars, it will fail politically and morally.

Which addition would best clarify how paragraph 3 advances the thesis?

(Insert one sentence at the start of paragraph 3, before "Some city leaders…".)

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Student essay (Paragraphs 1–4)

[1] The district should start school no earlier than 8:45 a.m. for high school students. Later start times would improve academic performance and student health because teenagers' sleep cycles are biologically different from adults'.

[2] Many teens cannot fall asleep early, even when they try. If school starts at 7:30, they must wake up before their bodies are ready. That leads to chronic sleep deprivation, which affects mood and attention. A later start would reduce that problem.

[3] Some people argue that changing the schedule would interfere with sports and after-school jobs. But sports can adjust, and jobs can adjust too. Our community has adjusted schedules before, like when the district changed the calendar last year. So the schedule can change again.

[4] In the end, student health should come first. Healthy students learn better, and learning is the point of school. Therefore, the district should move the start time to 8:45.

Revision: Which revision would most improve the essay's reasoning development?

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Student essay (Paragraphs 1–4)

[1] Students should be allowed to use AI writing tools for brainstorming in English classes, as long as they cite the tool and submit planning notes. A limited, transparent policy would support learning because it treats AI as a prewriting aid rather than a shortcut that replaces thinking.

[2] Brainstorming is often the hardest part. Students stare at blank pages and panic, and then they write something rushed. If a tool can suggest possible angles or counterarguments, students can spend more time evaluating ideas. This is similar to talking with a classmate, except the student still chooses what to keep.

[3] However, AI can also generate full essays, and that is cheating. Cheating is bad because it is dishonest. When students cheat, they don't learn. That's why teachers should ban AI.

[4] Even so, banning AI entirely is unrealistic. Students have it on their phones, and they will use it secretly if they feel punished. A policy that allows brainstorming but requires citations and drafts would make the classroom more honest. Therefore, the school should adopt a limited AI policy instead of a total ban.

Diagnosis: Which aspect most weakens the author's line of reasoning?

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The principal at Riverside High is considering a new policy: students would place phones in locked pouches during class, unlocking them only during lunch and after school. Some students say this is too strict, but the policy is necessary because phones distract from learning and damage real friendships.

First, phones make it harder to learn. Even a quick glance at a notification breaks concentration. Teachers can tell when students are half-listening, and then class becomes less meaningful for everyone.

Second, phones affect friendships. When people sit together but scroll separately, they are not actually connecting. If students had fewer chances to hide behind screens, they would talk more and build stronger relationships.

Third, the locked-pouch system would help students become more responsible. If students can't rely on their phones, they will learn to plan ahead and manage boredom. This is a life skill.

For these reasons, Riverside should adopt the phone pouches. Students might complain at first, but they will eventually realize they are happier.

Insertion: Which addition would best clarify how paragraph 3 advances the thesis?

A. Add after "Second, phones affect friendships.": "This is why the pouch policy is about more than academics; it also protects the social environment that makes school worth attending." B. Add after "When people sit together but scroll separately, they are not actually connecting.": "Some apps are designed to be addictive, which is why students cannot simply 'choose' to stop checking them." C. Add after "If students had fewer chances to hide behind screens, they would talk more and build stronger relationships.": "Because the thesis argues that phones distract from learning and damage friendships, limiting phone access directly supports both parts of that claim." D. Add after "For these reasons, Riverside should adopt the phone pouches.": "The school should also repaint the cafeteria to make it more welcoming."

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The principal at Ridgeview High wants to ban all student use of phones during the school day, including lunch and passing periods. The policy is meant to address distraction and bullying. I believe the school should not implement a total ban; instead, it should allow limited phone use because a blanket ban ignores practical realities and doesn't address the root causes of misuse.

A total ban is unrealistic because phones are part of how students coordinate rides, jobs, and family responsibilities. If a parent's work schedule changes, students need to know. Also, many students use translation apps or check the online gradebook to stay organized. Schools should not pretend phones are optional when they are built into daily life.

Supporters say phones cause distraction, and they are right that some students scroll during class. But distraction isn't solved by confiscating devices; it's solved by engaging instruction and clear consequences for off-task behavior. If a student is bored, they will find a way to be bored even without a phone. The school should focus on teaching students how to manage attention.

Bullying is another reason given for the ban, since phones can spread rumors quickly. Bullying is terrible, and it should be punished. However, banning phones won't stop bullying because students can still bully face-to-face. The real solution is stronger counseling and a clear reporting system.

In conclusion, Ridgeview should reject a total ban and adopt a limited policy that allows phones outside instructional time. When schools treat students like they can learn responsibility, students will rise to the expectation.

Insertion: Which addition would best clarify how paragraph 3 advances the thesis?

A. Add at the end of paragraph 3: "Because the thesis argues a total ban 'doesn't address the root causes of misuse,' showing that distraction is a classroom-management issue explains why banning phones targets the tool rather than the behavior." B. Add at the end of paragraph 3: "Phones are also expensive, and students should take better care of them." C. Add at the end of paragraph 3: "Many teachers dislike phones, and their opinions should be respected." D. Add at the end of paragraph 3: "Scrolling is common, and scrolling happens on many apps."

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Our county is debating whether to eliminate late fees at public libraries. Some residents argue that late fees teach responsibility; others say fees punish people who already have fewer resources. The county should eliminate late fees because they discourage reading, cost more to enforce than they bring in, and conflict with the library's mission.

Late fees discourage people from returning at all. If someone owes five dollars, they might avoid the library out of embarrassment or fear of being scolded. That means the book stays out longer and the person stops reading. The fee is supposed to encourage returns, but it can create the opposite behavior.

Also, late fees are not even a major source of revenue. Staff time is spent calculating fines, explaining them, and processing small payments. That labor costs money. If the library wants to be efficient, it should focus on getting materials back, not collecting quarters.

Libraries exist to provide access to information, and access should be as open as possible. When fees block someone's account, the library becomes less like a public service and more like a store. Taxpayers already fund the library, so the library should not create extra barriers.

Some people worry that without late fees, nobody will return books. But libraries can still send reminders and charge replacement costs for items that are truly lost. In other words, eliminating late fees does not mean eliminating accountability.

Therefore, eliminating late fees is a practical policy that matches what libraries are for.

Diagnosis: Which aspect most weakens the author's line of reasoning?

A. The essay uses a negative tone when it mentions "being scolded," which could offend librarians. B. The essay assumes, without evidence, that staff time spent on fines exceeds the revenue from fines, and it doesn't quantify or support the cost comparison. C. The essay should include a definition of "public service" to ensure readers interpret it consistently. D. The essay repeats the word "access" in paragraph 4, which makes the paragraph less varied.

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My school is debating whether to start the day later, moving first period from 7:30 a.m. to 8:30 a.m. I support a later start because it would improve student health, increase learning, and even help the community.

Teenagers need sleep. Doctors say teens' circadian rhythms make it harder to fall asleep early, so starting school at 7:30 forces students to function while tired. If students sleep more, they will be less likely to get sick and less likely to feel depressed. A later start is a health policy.

More sleep also improves learning. Tired students don't focus, and they forget information. If school begins later, students will pay attention and teachers won't have to repeat directions as much. This means class time will be used better.

A later start could also help the community because traffic would be different. If buses run later, there might be fewer cars on the road at the same time. Parents would have a smoother commute. The community would be happier.

Some people say sports and after-school jobs would be affected, but students can adjust their schedules. Besides, sleep is important, so it should come first.

Therefore, the school should start later because it helps students and helps everyone else too.

Insertion: Which addition would best clarify how paragraph 4 advances the thesis?

A. Add at the end of paragraph 4: "By showing that a later start changes commuting patterns and reduces congestion, this paragraph supports the thesis's claim that the policy would 'even help the community,' not just students." B. Add at the end of paragraph 4: "Traffic is annoying, and everyone knows it." C. Add at the end of paragraph 4: "Buses are large vehicles that can hold many students." D. Add at the end of paragraph 4: "The word 'community' can mean many different things."

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Student essay (approx. 330 words):

Public libraries should eliminate late fees. Late fees do not teach responsibility; instead, they block access for the people who need libraries most.

Supporters of late fees argue that fees motivate people to return books. But many patrons return items late because of transportation issues, work schedules, or family responsibilities. A small fine may not change those realities. Instead, it adds stress and makes patrons avoid the library.

Late fees also create inequality. A $10 fee is annoying for a wealthy patron but can be a real barrier for someone living paycheck to paycheck. If the library's mission is equal access to information, it should not punish poverty.

Some people worry that without fees, libraries will lose money. Yet libraries are funded by taxes, and taxes already pay for many things, so the library will be fine. In fact, staff time spent collecting small fines could be redirected toward programming, tutoring, and community events.

Finally, fee-free policies can increase returns. Many libraries that eliminated fees reported that patrons came back with long-overdue books once they no longer feared punishment. When people feel welcomed, they participate.

Which revision would most improve logical development in the bolded sentence?

(Choose the change that best strengthens reasoning rather than style.)